MUO Comment the peers work – Description
Overview:
Group Critiques are helpful for getting feedback on your work before you finalize it. Read through all the rough drafts, you will also see a range of examples to learn from and improve your own work.
Assignment Instructions:
For Assignment #1, you will choose two other students’ Critiques of an Advertisement and give them feedback on how well they did. You will need to make 2 comments, on 2 different students’ rough drafts which are found on the Rough Draft: Critique An Advertisement Doc.
How do you critique a peer’s work? Follow the same process that you did for analyzing and critiquing the advertisement:
Description: Did they adequately describe what was happening in the advertisement visually? Did they leave anything out?
Analysis: Are they describing accurately what is portrayed in the image, or are they adding their own ideas to the image that may not be evident, just analyzing what is directly observable? Are they missing anything that you think is an obvious detail that should be discussed?
Interpretation: Are they getting the same implications or messages that you are? Let them know if they made you aware of a different interpretation of what is happening in the advertisement. Let them know if you interpreted (or read) the imagery and text differently and why.
Judgment: Do you agree or disagree with their judgment? What criteria are you basing it on? Is it a personal experience, information that you have that might be relevant, etc.
Common Errors and Warnings
Make Actionable Suggestions:
Do not write: ” I like the way you did…”,
Do write: ” I like how you referred to Propositional Density when discussing your mnemonic devices color, you could also add an explanation about the shape of the logo in relation to both a sun representation and to symbolize the first letter in your name”.
Make 2 comments on students who have not received a critique.
Remember to make suggestions about Principles and the designs
Do not Resolve any of the comments ever. All comments need to remain open and viewable for credit. Resolved comments disappear from the thread, and students lose credit accidentally
Chang and Jillian
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